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I must ask this to you my bronies: Please comment, I need feedback on the comic, mostly some technical stuff like "How did you feel the flow of the panels" or "Was it over covered by text?" and things like that. That feedback to enhance my skills and do a better comic every page, yeah, I know I got proof readers but i need also feedback from the last chain that is you. At least to know what you think about. 8)
So, let the flames set free.
Superbowl day, I forgot, went to my friends and ate pizza... giants won, drink beer... I'm tired, BUT... here comes page 4.
*Dies from exhaustion.*
Thanks again to and for proof reading.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, ©Hasbro
Silent Hill, ©Konami
Silent Ponyville, Original concept and story by
Art was made by me.
So, let the flames set free.
Superbowl day, I forgot, went to my friends and ate pizza... giants won, drink beer... I'm tired, BUT... here comes page 4.
*Dies from exhaustion.*
Thanks again to and for proof reading.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, ©Hasbro
Silent Hill, ©Konami
Silent Ponyville, Original concept and story by
Art was made by me.
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Bueno comento en español porque me da flojera en ingles...
vas bien pero como jake dice Tantas partes de ponies flotando en la oscuridad confunden un poco, tal vez así lo quieres o la historia todavía no empieza pero que mas da, y también procura que el texto no distraiga mucho( después de inspeccionarla tres veces me percate del alicornio xD ) sigue asi :3
vas bien pero como jake dice Tantas partes de ponies flotando en la oscuridad confunden un poco, tal vez así lo quieres o la historia todavía no empieza pero que mas da, y también procura que el texto no distraiga mucho( después de inspeccionarla tres veces me percate del alicornio xD ) sigue asi :3